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請英文語法好的幫我改改這2篇文章！ thanks
1. Anwar F. Accawi tells us the story by providing background information. A small Lebanese Villages fell behind before the telephone came. It is a very traditional countryside society. There everything was slow and there is no need to hurry. The home of Im Kaleem was the village center in the past. When Magdaluna decided to install its own telephone, the telephone brought a new world to this small village. The villagers was no longer contented with their way of life; hungry for news from the outside world. It also let many people leaving the village for big cities or foreign countries to find jobs and better life.
2. I have s deep feeling after I read the “Lost, Then Found”. I feel pity and helpless of those homeless. We should gather together in the society care and help them. I have seen one homeless who has no legs. He only can climb forward. But he can write beautiful letter with chalk in his hand on the floor. I feel that he is pity. When the weather turns cold, he still has a T-shirt. When we turn on the heat and drink hot coffee at home. I think we should think about the homeless, and they also need cares from other people.
seule最佳答案 - 由投票者2008-01-17 08:22:05选出
你的原文是不是用中文直接用翻译引擎翻译到英文的？看出些这种翻译的痕迹。
按说这种作文作业，我实在不愿意帮人代作。以前当英语老师时，我也不鼓励学生用这种方法来偷懒。学习不是为了应付差事，这关系到个人的成才问题。
这次帮你改了一下，希望你能从中学习。
1. Anwar F. Accawi tells us the story by providing background information. A small Lebanese village had fallen behind before the telephone came. It was a very traditional countryside society. There everything was slow and there was no need to hurry. The home of Im Kaleem was the village center in the past. When Magdaluna decided to install his own telephone, the telephone brought a new world to this village. The villagers were no longer contented with their way of life, they were hungry for news from outside world. It also prompted many people to leave the village for big cities or foreign countries to find jobs and a better life.
2. I have s deep feeling after reading “Lost, Then Found”. I feel pity and helpless for those homeless people. We should unite our efforts to care and help them. I have seen one homeless without legs. He could only crawl forward. But he could write beautiful letters with chalks on the floor. I had sympathy for him. When the winter came, he still wore a T-shirt. When we turn on the heaters and drink hot coffee at home. I think we should think about the homeless, they also need cares from other people.
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1. Anwar F. Accawi tells us the story by providing background information. A small Lebanese Villages fell behind before the telephone came. It is a very traditional countryside society. There everything was slow and there was no need to hurry. The home of Im Kaleem was the village center in the past. When Magdaluna decided to install his own telephone, the telephone brought a new world to this small village. The villagers were no longer contented with their way of life; hungry for news from the outside world. Many people left the village for big cities or foreign countries to find jobs and for better life.
2. I have a deep feeling after I read the “Lost, Then Found”. I feel pity of and helpless to those homeless. The whole society should get together to care and help them. I have seen one homeless with no legs who can only climb forward but can write beautiful characters in chalk with his hand on the floor. I feel that he is pitiful. When the weather turns cold and we turn on the heat at home, he still has a T-shirt in the outside. We should care more about the homeless.
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